Can you help me fix this sentence for my cover letter?

Q: I need to put all these things below but not how I have it typed. Can you help me put order to this sentence for my cover letter?? I am a team player, enthusiastic and enjoy working with others. I am energetic, details oriented and I always strive to do my best in all that I do. I willingly take on challenges and enjoy learning new skills.

A: Actually, that's not so bad. Add a comma after "enthusiastic". Change "details oriented" to "detail-oriented". Leave off "in all that I do".

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